Woh jo Taar Taar thi Rooh
Raffoogar suna tha hote hain
Kuch aise
Ke laga lete hain
Taanke usme
Aksar pata bhi nahi chalta
Kahan kata
Kahan phata
Kahan toota tha dhaga!
Kitna asaan tha
Dunya se ladna Jana..
Magar
Jab jung khud se ho
Haar bhi apni
Jeet bhi apni
Tab tazyaane* bhi apne (*drum)
Aur matam bhi apna..
Shiddat ki thakan
Utarti hai rooh me
Aur aise kaari zakham
Ke koi Charagar* (*therapist)
Mudava* bhi na kar sake.. (*cure)
Yun to
Jism par
Kahin koi nishan na tha
Par
Rooh par charke* bade gehre the (*cuts)
Raffoogar ke paas le gaye
Toh usne hath kheench liya
Nikal liya sui ko dhaage se
Ke Bahut
Taar Taar Thi Rooh!!
In terms of poetry it has a beautiful flow but in terms of content I find it too depressing,though you poets say that sadness inspires you more than anything.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing, keep smiling, keep sharing
Thanks.All of it depends on the mood!
DeleteAnd pain/sad mood inspires poetry is a universally acknowledged truth.
As is the fact that poetry is an exaggerated expression mostly :)
badan ke zakhm to bhar jate hai kuch waqt ke sath
ReplyDeleterooh ka zakhm hara rahata hai marte dum tak